Pilpest Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 "HeLLsGamers is recruiting for our Strategy Division. We have over 800+ active members in our clan, and we are accepting any skill level in our Starcraft2 (Strategy Division.) Come join us, at hellsgamers.com, or send me a message for more information!!!" "HellsGamers is recruiting for its Strategy/SC2 division! We have 800+ members in the community with servers across a variety of games. PM me for more info" Post if you have better. Trolls/idiotic posts will receive infractions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StyleeZy Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 Perhaps change 'their' to 'our'. At first it seems like you're advertising for something you're not a part of, then when you say 'we' you take over the tone that you are a part of it. Overall its good :> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pilpest Posted July 30, 2013 Author Share Posted July 30, 2013 Perhaps change 'their' to 'our'. At first it seems like you're advertising for something you're not a part of, then when you say 'we' you take over the tone that you are a part of it. Overall its good :> Noob made it, and I didn't overlook it as I was doing other things... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
envisioN . Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 dude, your dayZ division leader... like, what division are you even in now? He's running double duty until we get a leader in Strategy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigJ Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 "HeLLsGamers is recruiting for our Strategy Division. We have over 800+ active members in our clan, and we are accepting any skill level in our Starcraft2 (Strategy Division.) Come join us, at hellsgamers.com, or send me a message for more information!!!" "HellsGamers is recruiting for its Strategy/SC2 division! We have 800+ members in the community with servers across a variety of games. PM me for more info" Post if you have better. Trolls/idiotic posts will receive infractions. Looks like what i was using to recruit, i would go with the first one, if you are using this join the chat channels "looking for team" and "general Chat" works best He's running double duty until we get a leader in Strategy Hmmm i wounder tho they are gonna appoint in charge since we are getting bigger now 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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