Check Out This Trailer!!!

[BobscaTheBob]

I recently created a new trailer on Gmod. Turn up your speakers cause the louder the better!!!!!! Hope you enjoy!!! Official series is coming up soon!

Edited August 10, 2013 by BobscaTheBob

[Dolan]

Please stop.

[WhataWackaMonk]

The effort put into a video like this is a lot, and for that you should be commended.

 

Let me, however, share some constructive criticism on your video. Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm trying to help you.

• The music gives me a headache. I know it's something you may like, or think others may like, but it is really way too loud. At some points of the video, you can faintly hear you or your friend talking, however the music just drowns it out. My volume is already on the lower settings, and the music still hurt. Consider something less in your face.
  
• The video play picture. This is the picture you have chosen to shown before people play the video. For your video, this consists of an old guy, a nuclear bomb, the Gmod symbol and *Ready for this JELLY!!!*. The only good thing about this picture is the title of the video *Zombie Quarantine; The New Era!!!*, even then, the at the end just doesn't fit in. Consider changing this to something which will make me want to click on your video, something that is interesting.
  
• Concerning the last clip. It would seem like you used the same clip from another youtuber's video. That clip sucks. Don't use 3rd person shots to shot an extended period of time, against 3 zombies. That clip, the spectator was zooming everywhere. Try to pick the most dramatic angle which can see everything, so you aren't moving every 2 secs.This disrupts the scene, and generally makes the video worse. Also, don't use the flashlight.
  
• Don't use those thought bubbles on the screen, I appreciate you were promoting your friend, but do that in the description. If I'm trying to watch the video, I don't want to have to stop and close annoying pop ups.
  
• Use action sequences. There is a 20 second clip of you looking at your friend.
  
• I understand this was a trailer, but you were inbetween lots of action shots, and a story line. You should of picked one or the other.
  

 

Some of the clips themselves weren't bad, but they either went on too long, or weren't appropriate for a trailer.

 

Hope this helps.

[JehovahBeginsWith I]

Great, now I have a headache. Fix the audio man for starters!

[Delink]

Best bass ever...